Today at school i said my pepeha if you do not know what a pepeha is i will tell you a pepeha is a moari way of greeting your self and i also play soccer at school and i did a edit but i am not finish it yet but here it is
Hi Ayi! I love the way you made your ghosts they look so cool. this reminded of how I used to go to McDonalds before lockdown. Maybe you could check your spelling.
That was a really cool slide! My favourite part is when the human was scared but when the ghost mentioned food, they were best friends. I think that’s something I’d do. Food always saves lives! I also like how you explained what a pepeha was. That will be helpful for your international readers! Remembering some full stops would be helpful too! Can’t wait to read your next entry!
Well done - 63 slides to make this animation, that must have taken a lot of effort, resilience and work. Keep it up! To make it easier for your readers, remember to use capital letters and full stops.
Looking forward to your future blog posts, Miss Laxa
Wow! You have done a lot of slides for your animation. It must of taken you some time to achieve that.
I wonder if you could use a capital "I" when talking about yourself in your next blog. Putting your thoughts into sentences will make your writing easier to read. I look forward to reading your next blog. From Mrs A
Hi Ayi It was a good idea explaining what a Pepeha is. Perhaps you could put your Pepeha in? Maybe in English and Maori then ask people to have a try? I loved your slide how you made the table and chairs was very clever. Also the McDonalds fries was very well done I showed my daughter just that 1 slide and she knew exactly what they were doing. I can't wait to see your next animation Ali.
Hey Ayi Nice blog and nice slides.I like the way you made the macdonalds logo on top of the shop and I like the way you have done a twist when it was nearly the end because you made the ghost friends with the human.Anyways keep up the great work Ayi. :)
Hi Ayi! I love the way you made your ghosts they look so cool. this reminded of how I used to go to McDonalds before lockdown. Maybe you could check your spelling.
ReplyDeleteHey Ayi
ReplyDeleteThat was a really cool slide! My favourite part is when the human was scared but when the ghost mentioned food, they were best friends. I think that’s something I’d do. Food always saves lives! I also like how you explained what a pepeha was. That will be helpful for your international readers! Remembering some full stops would be helpful too! Can’t wait to read your next entry!
Kia ora Ayi,
ReplyDeleteWell done - 63 slides to make this animation, that must have taken a lot of effort, resilience and work. Keep it up! To make it easier for your readers, remember to use capital letters and full stops.
Looking forward to your future blog posts,
Miss Laxa
FROM MRS A @ NWS
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ayi
Wow! You have done a lot of slides for your animation. It must of taken you some time to achieve that.
I wonder if you could use a capital "I" when talking about yourself in your next blog. Putting your thoughts into sentences will make your writing easier to read. I look forward to reading your next blog. From Mrs A
Hi Ayi It was a good idea explaining what a Pepeha is. Perhaps you could put your Pepeha in? Maybe in English and Maori then ask people to have a try? I loved your slide how you made the table and chairs was very clever. Also the McDonalds fries was very well done I showed my daughter just that 1 slide and she knew exactly what they were doing. I can't wait to see your next animation Ali.
ReplyDeletehi ayi your blog is REALLY cool but it will be good if you show as how you did it!
ReplyDeleteHi ayi,
ReplyDeleteI really like your animation and your blog is really cool.
Hey Ayi
ReplyDeleteNice blog and nice slides.I like the way you made the macdonalds logo on top of the shop and I like the way you have done a twist when it was nearly the end because you made the ghost friends with the human.Anyways keep up the great work Ayi. :)
hi ayi really nice work good on you!
ReplyDeleteHi Ayi,
ReplyDeleteAmazing Work It's very cool to watch. Keep up the good work! Byee!